Friendship is based on the premise of mutual respect, not allow a bit enforcement, interference nor controlment.请问老师not..nor是一种连接结构吗,所以无需加连接词吗?
Friendship is based on the premise of mutual respect, not allow a bit enforcement, interference nor controlment.
这个句子是非常典型的中式英语,有缺点甚至错误。剖析如下:
the premise:意为“首要条件”。其实它跟 be based on 连用,纯属多余,直接删除。包含 of 也删掉。即:
Friendship is based on mutual respect.
第二,not allow... 为错误表达。改为目前分词 not allowing... 作随着或方法状语。或者用并列句。
Friendship is based on mutual respect, not allowing .....
Friendship is based on mutual respect, and does not allow .....
最后,a bit 不可以直接作定语,需要加of, 即:a bit of。nor 改为 or。
句子改为:
1. Friendship is based on mutual respect, not allowing a bit of enforcement, interference or controlment.
2. Friendship is based on mutual respect, and does not allow a bit of enforcement, interference or controlment.